Seeking Design Critique: Roast Our New Landing Page for Branding Agencies

Dan G. · 2026-03-25T17:43:56.617Z

Anyone feeling design critic today? Roast our new LP: https://apta.agency/for-branding-agencies

Seeking Design Critique: Roast Our New Landing Page for Branding Agencies | Relume Community

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Matt J.
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Dan G. super clean, really nice. I love how easy it is to scan. It feels like it as all the right pieces in the right order. Couple of pieces that I noticed:
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I don't think I've really ever seen testimonials where the author was blurred out. Comes off a bit odd, like you are hiding something. I do know that you cater to white-label and I do understand having been on the agency side of hiring white-label, why you would want to blur them out but I think using generic names or avatars, or other placeholder methods might come off better than just straight up blurring them out. The immediate context of why may not be with everyone who is viewing but if you've tested this in someway and found that its fine, then all good.
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Really cool interaction here with the scroll and the 1 > 2 > 3 etc but was curious if there was meant to be any kind of track here or predictability? Pretty minor though. (first screenshot)
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The closing of the FAQs seems a bit abrupt compared to the opening.
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Really clever way of using the text reveal animations on the headlines - love that. For me, the footer one "Stay in the loop" - never finishes the reveal.
Really solid overall though - it has all the right signals and just enough details!
Bram R.
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Looks great! One small thing is the button hover interaction pushing the content below down 🙂
Submer
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Nice design and LP overall! I'd suggest changing the button hover animation to only scale horizontally and not shift all the content below. Consider having more color contrast between headlines and copy soy the texts don't feel that chunky. :)
Dan G.
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Great feedback, guys, love it 🫶
Dan G.
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Matt J. About the author: we actually thought about using placeholder or funny names (like Google does - img attached). It was my decision to go with the blur haha. What's your gut feeling say about that? "Anonymous Koala" vs. Blurred out faces. I thought that the blur "shows" something (there is a real person there), rather than something generic.
James S.
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I tried this on the slowest internet I could try(starbucks lol) and it loaded decently. I would try to optimize the photos and videos. I think you built this in framer, so be careful with layers and blurs and such as I have seen them increase load times. Especially since a lot of the blur use a bunch of layers to give a clean effect. I would say the testimonials section is a bit overwhelming for such a design being quite minimal. I would truncate or in some way shorten those in my own opinion. But overall, clean and pretty well optimized so far.

Matt J.
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Dan G. super clean, really nice. I love how easy it is to scan. It feels like it as all the right pieces in the right order. Couple of pieces that I noticed:
1.
I don't think I've really ever seen testimonials where the author was blurred out. Comes off a bit odd, like you are hiding something. I do know that you cater to white-label and I do understand having been on the agency side of hiring white-label, why you would want to blur them out but I think using generic names or avatars, or other placeholder methods might come off better than just straight up blurring them out. The immediate context of why may not be with everyone who is viewing but if you've tested this in someway and found that its fine, then all good.
2.
Really cool interaction here with the scroll and the 1 > 2 > 3 etc but was curious if there was meant to be any kind of track here or predictability? Pretty minor though. (first screenshot)
3.
The closing of the FAQs seems a bit abrupt compared to the opening.
4.
Really clever way of using the text reveal animations on the headlines - love that. For me, the footer one "Stay in the loop" - never finishes the reveal.
Really solid overall though - it has all the right signals and just enough details!
Bram R.
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Looks great! One small thing is the button hover interaction pushing the content below down 🙂
Submer
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Nice design and LP overall! I'd suggest changing the button hover animation to only scale horizontally and not shift all the content below. Consider having more color contrast between headlines and copy soy the texts don't feel that chunky. :)
Dan G.
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Great feedback, guys, love it 🫶
Dan G.
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Matt J. About the author: we actually thought about using placeholder or funny names (like Google does - img attached). It was my decision to go with the blur haha. What's your gut feeling say about that? "Anonymous Koala" vs. Blurred out faces. I thought that the blur "shows" something (there is a real person there), rather than something generic.
James S.
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I tried this on the slowest internet I could try(starbucks lol) and it loaded decently. I would try to optimize the photos and videos. I think you built this in framer, so be careful with layers and blurs and such as I have seen them increase load times. Especially since a lot of the blur use a bunch of layers to give a clean effect. I would say the testimonials section is a bit overwhelming for such a design being quite minimal. I would truncate or in some way shorten those in my own opinion. But overall, clean and pretty well optimized so far.